lunes, 29 de junio de 2009

Neonato

Si creyese en ese parto
gestado dentro del vientre
incoherente de tus días,
posiblemente se secarían
los charcos que nombran
el tiempo mojado de abril,
no habría espacios útiles,
ni dimensiones cercanas,
y se perdería la capacidad
de vivir en el lecho de la calma,
tras decir adiós por última vez.

La oscuridad es húmeda,
en ella crecen los hongos
tóxicos de las añoranzas,
en ella vuelvo a las penas
de mis ya maltratadas venas,
en ella discurro en silencio,
como si el mundo fuese
una tumba a ras de piel,
y te retomo con los cuentos
de los siete enanos muertos,
mientras Blancanieves me pide
que no vuelvan más a volver.


"Neonato"
© El País de los Tejados. chus alonso díaz-toledo.

13 comentarios:

L.G.M. dijo...

Poesía con mayúsculas, Chus, me han impresionado tus versos oscuros. Hablas de hongos, y de humedad, y no se me ocurre nada mejor para referirse a las ausencias que todos añoramos.
Un abrazo, compañero.

Álvaro dijo...

Mi estimado amigo, he leído, en una página en la que colaboras, de dónde han salido estos versos, y me ha sorprendido mucho. Habla usted del pensamiento de Louis Althusser, y de su empeño en devolver el origen científico al marxismo, que es como lo "parieron" (cito textualmente) Marx y Engels. Luego cuenta que ese pensamiento lo traslada usted al "individuo como lector único de la vida" (vuelvo a citarle textualmente), y que de ahí salen estas letras. Después de pensar, y pensar, y de repasar todos estos años de amistad, he llegado a una conclusión:
Este poema es grandioso, y usted es un loco extremadamente sabio, o un sabio que juega a hacerse el loco, o ambas cosas.

Un abrazo, y mis respetos por usted, y sus geniales letras.

Manuel dijo...

Qué envidia me da la facilidad con la que expresas la poesía. Yo, un prosista extremo, siento envidia sana e insana cuando te leo.

Un abrazo

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